Commit 97ec824
Rewrite bio in first person, tighten from 500+ to ~260 words
The mini-bio at the bottom of every post was 268 words of third-person
resume prose: every past role listed, every employer clause hedged,
the two best voice lines buried in paragraphs 2 and 3. It read like a
LinkedIn summary grafted onto a first-person blog.
New version:
- First person throughout (matches the rest of the site)
- Paragraph 1 drops from 268 to ~90 words; opens with the name, the
tagline, the current role, and two one-line role summaries of the
career arc. Enough context, none of the org-chart prose.
- Surfaces the two strongest lines earlier: the US CTO 'baddest
innovators' quote in paragraph 2, and the duct-tape-and-bubblegum
line stays in paragraph 3 (switched to 'I' from 'he').
- Replaces 'world's largest software development platform' filler and
the 500-features enumeration with a single direct line about what
I've actually been doing: figuring out how large engineering
organizations work.
Updated the first-sentence extraction tests to match. Meta
description now starts with the name and tagline instead of the
director-title-with-department-clause that was there before.
Co-authored-by: Copilot <223556219+Copilot@users.noreply.github.com>1 parent 22d53f4 commit 97ec824
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