Self review changes

Signed-off-by: Richard Wall <[email protected]>

Author: wallrj

cmd/app/options/options.go

@@ -70,7 +70,9 @@ type Options struct {
 	// CMClient is a rest client for interacting with cert-manager resources.
 	CMClient cmclient.Interface
 
-	// The host and port that the metrics endpoint should listen on.
+	// MetricsBindAddress is the TCP address for exposing HTTP Prometheus metrics
+	// which will be served on the HTTP path '/metrics'. The value "0" will
+	// disable exposing metrics.
 	MetricsBindAddress string
 }
 
@@ -156,6 +158,6 @@ func (o *Options) addAppFlags(fs *pflag.FlagSet) {
 	fs.BoolVar(&o.UseTokenRequest, "use-token-request", false,
 		"Use the empty audience token request for creating CertificateRequests. Requires the token request to be defined on the CSIDriver manifest.")
 	fs.StringVar(&o.MetricsBindAddress, "metrics-bind-address", "0",
-		"The host and port that the metrics endpoint should listen on (for example ::9402). "+
-			"If 0, the metrics server will be disabled. (default).")
+		"TCP address for exposing HTTP Prometheus metrics which will be served on the HTTP path '/metrics'. "+
+			`The value "0" will disable exposing metrics.`)
 }

deploy/charts/csi-driver/README.md

@@ -27,7 +27,7 @@ The TCP port on which the metrics server will listen.
 > false
 > ```
 
-Create a PodMonitor to add csi-driver to Prometheus.
+Create a PodMonitor to add csi-driver to Prometheus if you are using Prometheus Operator. See https://prometheus-operator.dev/docs/operator/api/#monitoring.coreos.com/v1.PodMonitor
 #### **metrics.podmonitor.namespace** ~ `string`
 
 The namespace that the pod monitor should live in, defaults to the cert-manager-csi-driver namespace.

deploy/charts/csi-driver/values.schema.json

@@ -300,7 +300,7 @@
     },
     "helm-values.metrics.podmonitor.enabled": {
       "default": false,
-      "description": "Create a PodMonitor to add csi-driver to Prometheus.",
+      "description": "Create a PodMonitor to add csi-driver to Prometheus if you are using Prometheus Operator. See https://prometheus-operator.dev/docs/operator/api/#monitoring.coreos.com/v1.PodMonitor",
       "type": "boolean"
     },
     "helm-values.metrics.podmonitor.endpointAdditionalProperties": {

deploy/charts/csi-driver/values.yaml

@@ -5,7 +5,8 @@ metrics:
   # The TCP port on which the metrics server will listen.
   port: 9402
   podmonitor:
-    # Create a PodMonitor to add csi-driver to Prometheus.
+    # Create a PodMonitor to add csi-driver to Prometheus if you are using Prometheus Operator.
+    # See https://prometheus-operator.dev/docs/operator/api/#monitoring.coreos.com/v1.PodMonitor
     enabled: false
 
     # The namespace that the pod monitor should live in, defaults

make/test-e2e.mk

@@ -34,7 +34,6 @@ e2e-setup-cert-manager: | kind-cluster $(NEEDS_HELM) $(NEEDS_KUBECTL)
 		--set startupapicheck.image.repository=$(quay.io/jetstack/cert-manager-startupapicheck.REPO) \
 		--set startupapicheck.image.tag=$(quay.io/jetstack/cert-manager-startupapicheck.TAG) \
 		--set startupapicheck.image.pullPolicy=Never \
-		--set prometheus.podmonitor.enabled=true \
 		cert-manager cert-manager >/dev/null
 
 # The "install" target can be run on its own with any currently active cluster,
@@ -47,7 +46,6 @@ endif
 
 test-e2e-deps: INSTALL_OPTIONS :=
 test-e2e-deps: INSTALL_OPTIONS += --set image.repository=$(oci_manager_image_name_development)
-test-e2e-deps: INSTALL_OPTIONS += --set metrics.podmonitor.enabled=true
 test-e2e-deps: e2e-setup-cert-manager
 test-e2e-deps: install
 

test/e2e/suite/cases/metrics.go

@@ -1,3 +1,19 @@
+/*
+Copyright 2021 The cert-manager Authors.
+
+Licensed under the Apache License, Version 2.0 (the "License");
+you may not use this file except in compliance with the License.
+You may obtain a copy of the License at
+
+    http://www.apache.org/licenses/LICENSE-2.0
+
+Unless required by applicable law or agreed to in writing, software
+distributed under the License is distributed on an "AS IS" BASIS,
+WITHOUT WARRANTIES OR CONDITIONS OF ANY KIND, either express or implied.
+See the License for the specific language governing permissions and
+limitations under the License.
+*/
+
 package cases
 
 import (
@@ -17,7 +33,7 @@ const (
 var _ = framework.CasesDescribe("Metrics", func() {
 	f := framework.NewDefaultFramework("metrics")
 
-	FIt("Should serve Go and process metrics on port 9402", func() {
+	It("Should serve Go and process metrics on port 9402", func() {
 		By("Discovering the name of the csi-driver Pod")
 		pods, err := f.KubeClientSet.CoreV1().Pods(certManagerNamespace).List(context.TODO(), metav1.ListOptions{
 			LabelSelector: "app.kubernetes.io/instance=csi-driver",