Minor copyedits

Author: alexcrichton

src/editions/transitioning-an-existing-project-to-a-new-edition.md

@@ -92,15 +92,15 @@ In Rust 2018, it's considered idiomatic to use the [`dyn`
 keyword](../rust-2018/trait-system/dyn-trait-for-trait-objects.html) for
 trait objects.
 
-We ideally want `cargo fix` to fix all these idioms automatically in the same
-manner we did for upgrading to the 2018 edition. **At this point in time,
-though, the "idiom lints" are not ready for widespread automatic fixing.** The
+Eventually, we want `cargo fix` to fix all these idioms automatically in the same
+manner we did for upgrading to the 2018 edition. **Currently,
+though, the *"idiom lints"* are not ready for widespread automatic fixing.** The
 compiler isn't making `cargo fix`-compatible suggestions in many cases right
-now (and is making incorrect suggestions in others), so enabling the idiom
-lints, even with `cargo fix`, is likely to leave your crate with many warnings
-still remaining.
+now, and it is making incorrect suggestions in others. Enabling the idiom lints,
+even with `cargo fix`, is likely to leave your crate either broken or with many
+warnings still remaining.
 
-It's planned to make these idiom migrations a seamless part of the Rust 2018
+We have plans to make these idiom migrations a seamless part of the Rust 2018
 experience, but we're not there yet. As a result the following instructions are
 recommended only for the intrepid who are willing to work through a few
 compiler/Cargo bugs!
@@ -121,24 +121,24 @@ trait Foo {
 
 We're now more idiomatic, and we didn't have to fix our code manually!
 
-As before, `cargo fix` may not be able to automatically update our code.
-If `cargo fix` can't fix something, it will print a warning to the console,
-and you'll have to fix it manually.
+Note that `cargo fix` may still not be able to automatically update our code.
+If `cargo fix` can't fix something, it will print a warning to the console, and
+you'll have to fix it manually.
 
-Also as mentioned before, there are known bugs around the idiom lints which
-means they're not all ready for prime time yet. This means that you may get a
-scary-looking warning to report a bug to Cargo, which happens whenever a fix
-proposed by rustc actually caused code to stop compiling by accident. If you'd
-like `cargo fix` to make as much progress as possible, even if it causes code to
-stop compiling, you can execute:
+As mentioned before, there are known bugs around the idiom lints which
+means they're not all ready for prime time yet. You may get a scary-looking
+warning to report a bug to Cargo, which happens whenever a fix proposed by
+`rustc` actually caused code to stop compiling by accident. If you'd like `cargo
+fix` to make as much progress as possible, even if it causes code to stop
+compiling, you can execute:
 
 ```console
 $ cargo fix --edition-idioms --broken-code
 ```
 
-This will instruct `cargo fix` to apply changes even if they cause code to stop
-compiling, and you'll see the compilation result after all fixes are applied. If
-you notice anything awry, please feel free to report an issue to Cargo and we'll
-help prioritize and fix it.
+This will instruct `cargo fix` to apply automatic suggestions regardless of
+whether they work or not. Like usual, you'll see the compilation result after
+all fixes are applied. If you notice anything wrong or unusual, please feel free
+to report an issue to Cargo and we'll help prioritize and fix it.
 
 Enjoy the new edition!