Refine LLM getting started guide for uniformity, fix critical errors #2939
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Update the LLM getting started guide for uniform tone and tense. Informally following the Google developer documentation style guide: https://developers.google.com/style. Also, resolve a number of outstanding issues with incorrect or misleading documentation and steps.
For reference, here are links to the current and proposed LLM guide:
https://docs-preview.pytorch.org/pytorch/executorch/2911/llm/getting-started.html (proposed)
https://pytorch.org/executorch/main/llm/getting-started.html (live)